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The End

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I dive a little more, the water is placid.
I only hear a noise, like a heartbeat, but I'm not sure if it's mine.
A groan, now it was me.
Just in time to realize that I need air, but I'm too far from the surface.

I close my eyes, lying on the bottom.
And slowly I feel like flying into a quieter place.
Where there is no fear,
nor sorrow,
nor death,
nor suffering.
Not even love or compassion.

Where there is nothing.


And that's enough.
This is the ending of my book. Hope you like it!! ^^

Critiques, please.
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perroperdido's avatar
no soy crítico, pero me gusta mucho lo que escribes, expresas sensaciones, y sentimientos profundos, de un modo que llega, y con belleza de "imagenes", para mi, muy bueno (este, pero otras cosas que escribes también), es mi opinion :shrug: